World Team - by Chloe
30 06 2006Sofia hates football but every night her parents will listen to the football and it would really get on her nerves so she would just go out and find her two friends. Their names were Delores and Inez who she had known all her life.
Most of the time when the football was on Sofia, Delores and Inez would just go for there 2 hour walk. Her whole family where that interested in the match that her dad would jump up and down if we scored a goal or he might just run around screaming and shouting for about 15 minutes. The girls would make sure that they had as much water as possible and at least 3 pieces of fruit to put in there backpack’s before they set of. They thought about going to the top of the hill so they did because they loved to see the view.As they stood at the top of the hill they could see the orange and lemon trees. The girls layback on the grass feeling the warmth of the sun on there faces and watch the clouds floating in the sky above them. It was so peaceful and calm very differnt from the chaos and rowdiness that the football causes. The 3 girls Sofia, Delores and Inez were not looking forward to going back home having to listen to the football they co








Hi Chloe
It’s Lucy it is about your story the bigging is great!
It has good descriptshion on the character that is Sofia about all sorts like the descripshion about her with the football on T.V.about how she heats it.
I think there are to meny thes in it soo keep it down with words o.k.
From Hope School Lucy.
thanks lucy i am proud of my self