The Day Football was banned - by Andrew

4 07 2006

It’s not really! But Andrew has written an excellent story.

It is 8:45am and I have arived at school and went to play the football match, it was who ever scores is in and Edward was in at the moment. Jim had the ball and was almost going to shoot but was badly fouled by Bill. Jim was on the ground in such agony that Joe went to tell the teacher, about five minutes later Miss Goddard came jogging out to see what all the commotion was about, when she saw Jim she sent him to Mr Steven Jones the school doctor to fix him up. 

 

So Harry  and Sam took Jim to the staff room. When Mr Steven Jones saw Jims arm and said it had been dislocated and he called the air ambulance which came 10 minutes later and took Jim away on a stretcher. 

I walked through the classroom door and was startled. I gasped. On the board, written in deep blood red whiteboard pen, were terrible words that made my insides squirm. I stood in the door way shocked still not taking my eyes of the board. I only moved when Kate nuged me in the back.

I went in and sat at my seat still not taking my eyes off the white board, my eyes only moved off the white board when I heard footsteps and voices from outside the door, it burst open and in came Mr Haywood he looked nerves as he called me to go to his office. “Jhon! I here you were at the seen!” Shouted Mr Haywood

“Yes sir I was but I wasnt the only one there was Bill, Jim-” I started but Mr Haywood Interrupted me

“I now who was there! but for your infomation Jim is in hospital and Bill has been suspended. “Has he? I-I-I’didn’t know sir” I said

” Yes and now we are having a coach in to teach you how to play football proply” said Mr Haywood with a smile.

“Thanks sir” I said happly. When I got back into class everyone was looking out af the window at a Green van which was pulling into the car-park, out of the car came a man we didn’t know who it was but when they looked at the school we saw it was Michel Owen coming to coach the school football team “YEAHHH” we all screamed as he walked up the steps to the school to be the new football coach.        


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3 responses to “The Day Football was banned - by Andrew”

4 07 2006
lucy morriss (19:09:32) :

To Andrew
I like the detial that you have put on it. I was realy intreesting.
Ithink there should be less Is in it like Mr Rowe I realy like it.

See you at school tomorrow.

From Lucy Morriss

5 07 2006
sofia (14:16:23) :

wow cool story andrew good explanation

13 07 2006
tiraj and milly (10:21:42) :

well down andrew that is good and i like to here some more.

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