Francesca`s birthday by Elkie
13 07 2006
Chapter 1 the sleepover Francesca`s birthday and sleover
One day a girl named Franchesca was walking to school. She went to Hope C.E. primary school. Franchesca loved her school. She apslootly loved it. She walked to school with her best freind Tracy. She loved school on Friday, beacause it was a non uniform day. So that means that they don`t have to go in there uniform. After school Tracy went to stop the night at Franchesca`s house. They had so much fun. They went out side on there tramplene. At bedtime Tracy,and Francesca wached cat in the hat.
Chapter 2 Francesca`s birthday
The next day it was Francesca`s birthday thats why Tracy went over to stop the night. At breakfast time Tracy ,and Francesca both had the same for breakfast. They had start. After breakfast they never got dressed like usaull they wached Francesca open her preasant`s. Francesca had loads of preasants she loved the preasant that Tracy gave her it was a bear factory bear called Holly. Francesca ran up to Tracy, and hugged her like mad ,and said “Thank you you realy are my best freind. At school every body was told by Tracy that it was Francesca`s birthday. Exept for the teachers. Tracy had a great idea about Francesca`s birthday. Tracy ran like crazy to find Cathrine. Finely she found her. She said to cathrine “Why don`t we have a suprise party for Francesca. Cathrine thought that it was a great Idea,and said “Lets get to work.
Chapter 3 Francesca`s suprise party
A phew days after Francesca`s birthday was the suprise party. Tracy and her mum,Cathrine invited all of francesca`s freinds. When every one got there they gave all of there presents to Francesca`s mum, cathrine. Then they all went to hide. Just then cathrine called Francesca down fo her tea
“ Mum why are all of my freinds here“
“For your suprise party of course“
“Who said anything about a party“
“You wouldent know, it`s a suprise party“ said Tracy
The End
By Elkie McMahon








COOOOOOOOL!!!! i like the bit at the end but i would also put some more and tell what happend at the suprise party!!! it was GOOOD!!
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It’s a great story and I would like to know more about the surprise party.
What a lovely story. I really enjoyed reading it in my lunchbreak. Well Done!