Alliterative Animals - by Christian
13 10 2006One teethy tiger.
Two jumping lepords.
Three Jumping giraffes.
Four miserable monkeys.
Five damp brtel dogs
Six funny fish.
Seven slithering snakes.
Eight fast fish.
Nine sleeping scorpens.
Ten happy hippos.








i relly like your animal poem
Well done that has britend up my day.
cya
by
elkie
hi
nice poem well done
sofia
hi christian
your poem is so cool.
hope you write more poems.
elin and mattie
i thought that your poem was great hope you write more of them .
daniel
year 4
Market Drayton
your poem was great,
i liked it quite the lot,
congratualtions