Space Alert! By Milly
29 01 2007In space there was nothing in the distance, not even one single planet. A space ship bursts out into space at fifteen o’clock. There was 2 men in the space ship, the captain was called Ernie and a scientist called Tom and they were trying to see if there was a planet to land on with interesting information.
“I can’t see anything not even one planet beyond the distance” said Tom, “well theres something wrong then and lets go and fix it” said the Captain.
Every thing went well then a star appeared. Then realized that they were in a place called boxspace.
Then as they got closer to the star they realized that it was a black hole. Then they started to panick and put the drink of milk in the wrong place.
As they got closer it started to shake and nothing fell apart and no drop of a drink was spilt and no food fell, on the shelf, “Captain this is strange because every thing is shaking,” Tom said Confusingly, “Its OK we just have to land safely somewhere but we cant, be calm Tom,” Said the Captain flicking the controls.
The captain pushed the wrong button and the shaking stopped but they were still going into the black hole and they felt scared.
To escape and survive they had to land on a planet but there was no planets because there was nothing in space except from the black hole. They tried to escape but they failed. Then after a couple of seconds they were amazed because they were in the black hole and it was beautiful. “wow it is beautiful I’d better put this on my paper,” The black hole was not deep and it had a surface and statues on the wall and its where you can breath, and there was strange writing called Boxter.
Then finally they found there way out they found planets and earth and landed on a Planet called Box and it was in a shape of a box as well, “wow I have never seen a box shaped planet before.” “I know well we’d better to go now so come on then get the information down. Then they took of again and landed on earth and were safe once and for all.








Dear Milly,
I thought your story was brilliant and exiting i thought it was the best story out of school cool!!!!
From Elly
wow milly! that was really good i liked the bit when they saw how beautiful the black hole was. it was really exciting.
Thanks polly and ell im glad you enjoyed it!
Cool mill. wow…. I am speechless..