Spaceship Whizzers by Sophie
29 01 2007 A clock chimed after mid night, and up in space a spaceship was sailing of to space All was well but suddenly a black hole came from the dissidence and it stormed up.The spaceship went down and down and in to the black hole.
They finally got back on to the write track again.The driver was very thirsty so he got a drink and put it by the buttons but then there was a big turn and the drink fell on the buttons so the spaceship imploded and they fell on a planet they were all fine these people were very clever.
So they went to find stuff so they could make another spaceship but then the pilot found some think in his pocket it was five plane crisps for the five people he had fagot all about them he had them from when he had lift of he shared them all out and got back to work.
When they came back they had wood sticks old pins and they ad made a hammer out of wood.So they got back to work so they could get out of here faster.A our latter they were very tied so they tried to get to sleep on the floor.
In the morning they got to work.Next they new the spaceship was there they got in side and then went to fly of they got to
The rite planet and then they were really proud of each other.
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That was great Sophie! But there was lots of spelling mistakes but oh well it was really good and i liked the bit when he looked in his pocket and there was crisps! they should of floated because you float.
byby for now!
milly
the beginning was really good and it made you want to read more there is loads of describing adn action well done sophie!
Well done sophie that is ace
Very good story, it was very imaginitive and we enjoyed it.