Hope CE Primary School

   A long time ago on a spaceship there were two ladies on their way to mars. But suddenly behind them a rock hit the spaceship. One of the ladies saw that the back of the spaceship was ruined. 

She said to the other lady “12345 we need to jump out quick before the spaceship gets more ruined.” But it was no good. Afterwards they tried to escape but failed, and one of the ladies tried to open the door but 3 of her fingers split. Later on they spotted a plane that had crashed and went over to it in the spaceship, and found some broken pieces. They tried to fit the pieces as the back of the spaceship and so they did and travelled of in it. The ladies travelled off on their journey to mars. They thought the engine fuel was running out and it did run out and they were nearly at mars. A while after trying to look for some more they saw a spaceship waiting on a rock. The ladies shouted to see if anyone was there. Then they heard a voice shout back “are you alright.” It was two men and a dog waiting in the spaceship. The ladies shouted back “please may we come in your spaceship because ours is going all funny.” “Yes” Shouted one of the men named Jamie. “Thanks” said the ladies. So they got in the other spaceship. Then they started going to mars. The men knew that there was a button leak on the buttons. They didn’t see a plane hovering above them. Then they did hear something and looked up I the sky and saw the plane. They shouted for help the plane looked down and came to save them. The plane asked them were they wanted to go and they said “please May you take us back home we were on our way to mars but we are never going to get there.” They arrived home safely, but they said that they might go back again and so they did they eventually they got there. They felt exhausted, going again, but they were happy.