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The Planets - A class anthology

6 02 2007

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Date : 6 February 2007
Categories : Class 2

15 responses to “The Planets - A class anthology”

6 02 2007: polly (11:05:08) :

Pluto
Behind all the other planets
Rock and ice
A planet no more
Sees a spot in the black sky
Barely shining
The yellow surface glitters
As it plods around the golden fiery ball
Takes thousands of years to get around the firey ball
Gliding and spinning like a ballet dancer
Until the ballet dancer gets back home and starts her long journey again
6 02 2007: Fay M (11:10:36) :

The second in line waiting to shine,
Scorched by the sun,
Whirling through space,
Beside it’s faithful leader, throughout it’s everlasting life,
Banana bright fighting for glory,
The goddess in both beauty and strength,
Nearly impossible to live on this harsh fighter,
Whizzing around the sun at enormouse pace ,
Soon to return back to the start to begin her amazing journy again.
6 02 2007: Edward clarkson (11:24:22) :

ten green grass bottls are hanging on the
a wall
then there will be nine green grass bottls on the wall and if one will crass
it will sond just like a car crass then there will be eight green grass bottls
on the wall
6 02 2007: polly (11:28:21) :

Venus
second in line
near the huge deadly golden ball
brightest planet
like spring, summer, autumn and winter
In spring Venus is a white snowdrop swaying in the slight wind
summer is daisies and dandilions and the summer sun
autumn is the fruit from the trees
winter, venus is the snow off the ground
it is the bringer of peace as it quickly makes its way around the sun, elegantly dancing away
Goddess of love and beauty
7 02 2007: Elkie (10:25:39) :

Neptune

Neptune is he eighth planet fom the sun,
It may be seventeen times the mass of earth,
But Uranus is its twin,
Neptune has may more facts,
Like its named after the Roman god of sea.
The sea reflects of the sky,
Neptune is like the sea or sky because of its bluness.
7 02 2007: dana (10:30:28) :

plouto is a ball of rock that sits in the night sky
pepole cannot see it naked eye
it as brown as soil
it lives so far from the sun because he is not his frend this is because the sun bosed about size he used to live near but then crawled like a baby to the darkest corner of the solar system
7 02 2007: Jack (10:31:18) :

Planet Earth
Planet Earth as green as green paper as blue as the sea as it gos round the hot big fireball and the moon gos round it and the trees on it wave up to space with there big arms like people waving to the sun as they jump to the sky and fall all the way back down and splash in to the sea it spins round and round untill it finely axaplods and turns in to medias strikeing all eight planets.
7 02 2007: Samir (11:03:40) :

Pluto is the last planet of the sun,
The smallest but the coolest,
It is stuck to the space glue for hundreds of years,
Little fireball smaller than little pins,
overal orbit,
Cold as Ice but small as a rock,
The last sun conpanion,
and away from the flock.
7 02 2007: milly (11:14:24) :

The Planet Saturn is the second largest planet,
The sun covers all planets saturn id the fifth planet that is close to the sun
and is the second largest planet to come.
Saturn has a grey gas ring 10 times bigger than the earth that sings.
Saturn is cold and bare -178′C but it wasnt envented by Tony Blaire.
The mass is so low and Jupiter has more,
Planet Saturn will be able to go in a large bath tub and more and more.
Saturns core may be Rocky and about the size of the planet Earth,
and has the same name as a God but planet saturn has not had Birth.
7 02 2007: lauren (11:22:51) :

Mars
i sat in the cold night
thinking if i could see mars
and gazing at the stars trying to see mars
mars is named after the roman god of war
fourth planet from the sun
mars has two moons that are small
7 02 2007: chloe (11:26:07) :

Mars

Red as bloud
The 4th planet from the sun
Named after the roman god of war
The brown lumpy surface
As rough as a rock
7 02 2007: james (11:27:35) :

Saturn is the second massive planet,
one of the most butiful sights in the solar system,
saturn is like a yellow ball that stays in the sky,
saturns ring is like a circle of rainbow,
it is the 6th planet from the sun.
7 02 2007: Dingwall Primary (21:23:03) :

What fab poems - we are really impressed! They are out of this world!!

We wrote some postcards form space which you might like to read - they are on the P5 section of our website.
9 02 2007: Daena C (10:53:05) :

Venus

Venus is planet number two like an elagant flower swaying in the breeze.
No human may live on this harsh planet,posines air spreads eery where.
There is no way Venus escaping the scorching heat of the sun but as night comes it gets cooler and cooler. Venus has no mons to calm the heat of the sun but it still gets dar and it still gets light.

By Daena C
9 02 2007: Joe (11:11:07) :

Saturn

The sith of the planets,
hool a hooping its ring like a gymnast.
Dark gloomy skys all around,
with the distant star tanning the frount of Jupitar
just apearing behind Mars.
As the sixth planet comes in
As behind Jupitar an Uranus.
But how was its gymnast partner made.