The Lost People by Lauren
21 02 2007The lost people
Why did we have to go on the spaceship that day? Why did we have to crash? And why did Mr White have to drive the spaceship?
The crew were just fine when Mr White had to go to sleep. The spaceship went out of control it was crashing in all the rocky earth. The spaceship stopped, Fay fell out the door. She was hanging on the opened door Fay was just about to let go when Sarah said” grab my hand you can trust me’’.
Sarah pulled her up.
The spaceship was wrecked all over. The windows were all cracked and the door snapped in half. Fay and Sarah and Mr White tried to fix it but they couldn’t. The crew tried to get all the food. All that was left was two apples and some bread. That’s all that had to last them.
There was only 3 people that survived the big crash. The crew managed to stick together. It was a big planet the crew travelled all over the planet to see if there was a spaceship.
The crew tried to have fun and they saw a football. It was big so the crew was playing happy when suddenly it sprouted long, black wirery hair. It was a hair that was a live, it kept jumping on the crew with a big rock.
Sarah wailed ’’ leave me alone you hairy thing’’.
It ran a way with all the food and went past Mr White.
Fay shouted “you are so stupid you could off get the food out of the hair’s hands’’.
Sarah said’ what are we going to eat now we have to found our own food look what you have done’’.
So the crew set off into the sun set hunting for some meat. Mr White, Sarah and Fay saw the hair that had all his food the hair was big and fat.
Fay said” he eat all the food now what are we going to do’’.
Mr White said’’ we can he him it will be a nice lunch who wants to cook it’’
Fay said’ I will but I am never do it again ok’’.
Sarah said’’ you want have to but thank you’’
So the crew found a cave and found some twigs and rooks and made a camp the crew sleep under the stars whishing that a spaceship came and took them home. The crew went to sleep under the stars. Fay woke up at 9 am there was a space standing right next to the crew.
Fay said “wake up every one there is a spaceship’’
So all the crew woke up.
Sarah said “are we dreaming or some think pinch me “.
Mr White said ‘’ ok I will pinch you ‘’
So Mr White pinched Sarah.
Sarah said’’ that was not nice’’.
Fay said’’ stop that you two it is no a dream ok so let get on the spaceship’’.
So all the crew went to the spaceship.
Mr White said “I can dive the spaceship if you want.
Fay and Sarah said “NO you can cant you mite go to sleep it is a big responsibility’’
So the crew left the space up in to the air.
Sarah said “I want to go to space again lets go next week but lets not crash.
Mr White said” maybe in a year or two’’.
By Lauren Archer








This story was excellent and funny! We really enjoyed reading it! We did see some sentences that didn’t really make sense! We really liked the start of it where it had all those quistions that really made the story sound exciting!!!
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Ilike your story. With thew question makes in it is great!
Really good Lauren!
Nice one Lauren! i liked the living football!!!
Dear Lauren,
Cheers! We are teachers in Northern California, learning about blogging. We read your post and it looks great.
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Great story Lauren, lots of humour and an especially clever start and finish. More please!