Star Wars Episode IV - By Andrew
6 11 2007All was peaceful over some unknown planet, although it was waiting. Waiting since the first star appeared. Nothing could have predicted what events were about to unfurl.
And then it happened. Out of the midist of time and space a ship appeared. Growing bigger with every second that came and went. As it continued to go over, it was being followed by something. Somthing enormous, and then it came. A collosal ship was appearing right behind.
At 100 times bigger, the second ship had already won. With silent lazers penetrating the darkness and crippling the deflector shield. All was lost for the rebels. Their main reactor was disabled.
As the imperial star destoyer, a strange sound disturbed the crew inside. Then the door opened and white storm troopers, burst in, puncturing rebel armour. There was no escape.
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Wow Andrew that is an amzing story, the fight was exellent, plus I loved the word penetrating very well done
Elkie
I loved this piece of writing - as a fan of Star Wars and a Y5/Y6 teacher I think this was excellent Andrew.
As a result of reading this I am going to be showing my class some short film clips as stimulation for short creative writing sessions. I hope they can produce work equally as entertaining as yours….