Year 4s have been noticing that Spring has sprung

8 02 2008

Spring walk 

Mrs Leach took us out to look for signs of spring,

There were some purple buds starting to burst out of there winter case, Sprouting up to the faded orangey yellow sun,

But I was to busy dreaming of galloping across the deserted beach on my chestnut pony,

Mrs Leach took us out to look for signs of spring,

I could feel pimply flowers that were tiny and soft,

Like corn on the cob,

But I was to busy chatting to Joanne,

Mrs Leach took us out to look for signs of spring,

The leaves were spiky when I tried to touch them,

But I too busy thinking about my holiday last year,

Mrs Leach took us out to look for signs of spring.  

By Dana


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2 responses to “Year 4s have been noticing that Spring has sprung”

27 05 2008
Dana (08:43:49) :

hehehehehe my poem is on the internet!

8 07 2008
Dana (18:22:44) :

wow i never new that was so good

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