Hope CE Primary School

Spring poems

7 03 2008

To read Daena’s click here.

To read Joe’s click here.

And Jess’s too click here

14 03 2008: Jack (10:34:19) :

I thought that all the poems were very good. And realy liked joes poem.
14 03 2008: holly (10:35:07) :

i thought Daena’s poem was really good because it was really descriptive.
14 03 2008: Conor (10:35:25) :

I like all of them because it was like a war between winter and spring. It was really describing the two seasons.
14 03 2008: william (10:36:11) :

I really enjoyed joes poem, fantastic!
14 03 2008: Matthew (10:36:46) :

I thought that the descriptive words were very good.
14 03 2008: Matthew (10:39:50) :

I really enjoyed Daena’s poem because she compared spring to winter and made sound like a competition.
15 04 2008: Class 3B from Charnock Hall Primary School (15:08:10) :

We liked all the poems on your blog very much. They were very good at describing Spring and Winter. We really liked the descriptive words you used. We have been learning about blogs because we want to make our own blog. Thank you for giving us some tips for when we make our own later.

From Y3B, Charnock Hall Primary School, Sheffield
26 04 2008: Fay M (22:08:06) :

Hi it’s Fay
Well done with the poems, they were all really good. I especially liked Joes. I hope you are all alright, I am good. Miss you Daena, Elly, Milly, Elkie, Tracy
Bye See you on Friay (hopefully!)
Fay
xxx
13 11 2008: elkie (22:07:36) :

I really like daena’s poem because she used loads of describtive words