Hope CE Primary School

Storm Poem

13 05 2008

The Storm Snake by Samir

Sonny won’t slither outside tonight,

I think because of the Storm Snake,

It strikes at the window with a swishing tail,

Spits its water down the chimney,

But it does not slither down,

Sonny wonders why then slithers back upstairs-

To rest in his own royal bed,

Knowing it was only the wind.

16 05 2008: chloe (19:33:10) :

good poem samir well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS this is eddys sister
23 06 2008: chloe (10:27:08) :

well done i think dat it is ace xxxxxxxxx
16 09 2008: Joe Morris (13:05:32) :

Cool Samir
Its really good but why aren’t you up dating the blog any more?
Really great poem

Joe
16 09 2008: Andrew .T. (13:08:56) :

Super work Samir! It was well phrased.
30 09 2008: Elkie (18:11:10) :

I thought your poem was very good Samir. I miss everyone soooooooooooo much, and I wish I was there with all of you. Hope School rocks.

From Elkie